10. Faulty Parallelism Incorrect: Not only are these Incidents a violation of human rights but they increase and further separate communities contrary to why communities were initiated. |
16. Unclear Pronoun Reference Incorrect: With an education, a person can get a job easier than a person who does not have one.Correct: With an education, a person can get a job easier than a person who does not have an education. |
18 December 1997 |